Lucas Samples Nice job with introduction and closing. Clearly spoken, good speed, volume was a little low; next time talk louder. Mentioned some interesting facts such as she went to seminary. Too short, 1.25 minutes/ 2 minutes were required. Garfield: Fact organization needs work. You should have discussed her life in chronological order. You started out saying born on a farm and mentioned her parents name – didn’t say whether or not she had siblings. Then jumped to where she went to college. Then jumped to when they were married and he got sick. Then discussed children. Didn’t discuss what she enjoyed doing – her passion in life. 24/30
Lucas Samples
ReplyDeleteNice job with introduction and closing. Clearly spoken, good speed, volume was a little low; next time talk louder. Mentioned some interesting facts such as she went to seminary.
Too short, 1.25 minutes/ 2 minutes were required.
Garfield: Fact organization needs work. You should have discussed her life in chronological order. You started out saying born on a farm and mentioned her parents name – didn’t say whether or not she had siblings. Then jumped to where she went to college. Then jumped to when they were married and he got sick. Then discussed children.
Didn’t discuss what she enjoyed doing – her passion in life.
24/30